I just changed the background to white - it does look better. And I removed the TOC page (don't need it anyway).
Thanks for the comments guys. Any other things you notice?
Notice I said CONSTRUCTIVE.... [img]tongue.gif[/img]
Anyway, I'm doing the guts of a website for the shop I'm working at. Somebody else did the basic set-up, I'm just filling it. Nothing fancy - just a way to get our name out nationally.
It's far from finished, but I was just wondering if there's anything I should add, change, etc. This is the first site I've done anything for, so I really can't do anything complicated.
Anyway, any help would be appreciated.
And be gentle.
www.islandguns.com
I just changed the background to white - it does look better. And I removed the TOC page (don't need it anyway).
Thanks for the comments guys. Any other things you notice?
I think it looks great, man! [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img]
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">hehe... I used to work in the same building as that guy (Joe cartoon from joecartoon.com). Interesting fellow...Originally posted by AngelsDemon:
You suck! But yo' momma's sweeeeeeeet. [img]eek.gif[/img] [img]wink.gif[/img] [img]tongue.gif[/img]
Been watching too many Joe Cartoon's lol
He's a "local" here in Grand Rapids, MI!
Kanuck - not bad for a first effort! My main comment would be to "standardize" the layout width-wise, in a table, and put that top nav in-line with your logo/header. By putting it in a table, the layout remains the same no matter what your browser dimensions are, and you don't lose flow when resizing bigger.
<font color="#cd6600" size="1">[ March 17, 2004 02:04 PM: Message edited by: pairadocs ]</font>
I agree, not bad at all for a first effort! I'd center the title bar, move the address to the bottom of the page (and does it have to be on the other pages as well?) or at least make it into one line to roll across the bottom of the title bar and save space. Keep the tagline "Serving the Outdoor and Shooting Community" centered as well. Maybe center some of the info on the bottom of the first page too.
I'd make a couple small changes to the graphics, but that's subjective. Your call there.
Those are minor gripes though. The main thing is it's easy to navigate, and not overly cluttered. So good on ya, KK. [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img]
not bad, though, the background almost makes it look less professional, or, I dunno what the word is Im looking for, just, less of a background or no backrgound might be better, but, so far Im lookin' around, seems good, maybe some different fonts?
You suck! But yo' momma's sweeeeeeeet. [img]eek.gif[/img] [img]wink.gif[/img] [img]tongue.gif[/img]
Been watching too many Joe Cartoon's lol
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